Part 4:
Today many people has msn, Facebook, myspace etc, and they use it a lot for communicating with other people. When people post things on their profiles, many people but especially friends can see these posts. Some times, it can be very dangerous when other people that you don’t know see what you put on you profile and can heart you. Some people think that when they post their profile, the only persons that are going to see it would be their friends but they are wrong so in the future, be caution of what things you are pudding.
your paragraph has a good format with an introduction and conclusion. You explained about what they told you but I have a suggestion. You can make you paragraph bigger and with more information. I say that you should talk about how you feel about the web pages. If you have one or you hate them.
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Ok, I agree some parts with you..... your posts should go directly to your friends but there are many people who can get into your Facebook, Myspace and see all your personal information, so to prevent that never post your address, phone number, never put your name or any other personal information.
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